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=seltaya

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The Last Rose

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You had a butterfly’s wings…  And each ink stained pattern wound itself around you  Bleeding into blacks and yellows, till the winds were forced  To lift you up and sweep you away into springtide.   
II.   
Each of your words stitched themselves  Into the lining of your emerald chrysalis,  Whispering false nothings so you could never  Return, never take it all back.   
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Heaven never told you that winter fell  Under an open sky that you had written your heart into  Where each drop of white ink tattered the gossamer  Threads whe
Traces of Eden...
by *Silvercharmed

First, I'd like to say I agree with you, the first two stanzas do work very well. First Stanza: Butterflies and wind...are like t...

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     t        h        i        e        f   
l----------------------------------------l  l    Now, of course you can take that       l  l                  word and frame it              l  l-----------------------------------
Stolen
by *Silvercharmed

Yay, more word pictures, I love these. Ok, ahem, now I'll try to be serious. Obviously I love the way you created imagery with th...

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Blood on the ground, blood on my skin.  Why do I let those cruel knives in?  Why don’t I just defend myself?  Don’t I care for my mental health?  Yes – that’s why, that’s why I hold back  And leave my heart bare to attack.  I’m not as helpless as I seem,  Nor do I live within a dream.  You’ve never seen her, but she’s here,  Here in my mind, drinking my tears.  This other me, this inner beast  Who on their blood would love to feast.  And so she is caged, deep within;  To let her loose would be a sin.  She says she’d just stop the
Why?
by *sorentense

First of all, it's dark...we all know that, but that's not necessarily a bad thing, in fact, it really adds to the visceral i...

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Like an Eagle
by =dawndelver

Hm hm hm...where to start...at the beginning, I suppose. ^^ Vision: I personally really like the vision on this image. The background ...

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  • Current Residence: Atlantis
  • deviantWEAR sizing preference: XL
  • Interests: shiny things,sharp objects,anything that goes boom,tech,computers,scifi/fantasy,really fast things
  • Favourite movie: Batman Begins
  • Favourite band or musician: TSO, Nightwish, Def Leppard, Styx, Supertramp, Bach, Vivaldi, Beethoven, Van Halen, Queen...
  • Favourite genre of music: Classic, soft, hard, melodic, alternative, progressive, symphonic Rock/Metal. And Baroque/Jazz/Blues
  • Favourite artist: Igor Sikorsky (yes, helicopters are an artform)
  • Favourite poet or writer: Poe, Asimov, Zahn, Clarke, Heinlein, Tolkien, Salvatore, Shakespeare
  • Favourite style of art: scifi/fantasy
  • Operating System: Windows 7 RC build 7100/Ubuntu 9.04
  • MP3 player of choice: creative zen v plus
  • Shell of choice: Gnome
  • Wallpaper of choice: Machinery of the Stars
  • Skin of choice: Divinorum
  • Favourite game: RPGs, especially Bioware's
  • Favourite gaming platform: PC
  • Favourite cartoon character: Dilbert
  • Personal Quote: Life is always throwing curveballs...which is good, since the fastballs usually hit between the eyes
  • Tools of the Trade: Gimpshop, pencils, apophysis, bryce, poser

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:iconsilvercharmed:
*Silvercharmed Oct 15, 2009, 5:27:16 AM
Thanks for the :+fav: hun.
Oi, what happened to your journal? Weren't you working on a CSS?

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Come to the edge, he said,
They said: We are afraid
Come to the edge, he said.
They came,
He pushed them,
...and they flew.
Guillaume Apollinaire
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=seltaya Oct 15, 2009, 7:20:01 AM
I deleted them all. I was going to make a CSS, but I lost the motivation to do it, I've been having some issues lately.

Oh, and you're welcome.

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90% of people...blah blah blah. If you're one of the 10% who laugh at these sigs but don't copy/paste anything...well, good for you.
:iconsilvercharmed:
*Silvercharmed Oct 15, 2009, 9:53:27 AM
*sends you motivation*
Im sorry. :hug:

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Come to the edge, he said,
They said: We are afraid
Come to the edge, he said.
They came,
He pushed them,
...and they flew.
Guillaume Apollinaire
:iconseltaya:
=seltaya Oct 15, 2009, 11:15:37 AM
:iconwinghugplz: It's hardly your fault, I haven't even spoken to you in weeks.

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90% of people...blah blah blah. If you're one of the 10% who laugh at these sigs but don't copy/paste anything...well, good for you.
:icona-million-years-ago:
~a-million-years-ago Sep 17, 2009, 6:28:28 PM
I think.... if you were a pokemon.... you would be... stantler....
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